Darling, Please [Listen to this song, that is :)]
Here's another piece for you to (hopefully) enjoy. I've been working on and off this piece, and now I've decided that it's ready to be either shared or inflicted, depending on your opinion :).
This one has the dubious distinction of having parts that were among the first I've ever written.
Comments, criticism, compliments and suggestions are welcome!
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Comments
i liked the sixteeths in the piano the best. the rhythm, the melody they had, i liked that.
also interesting was the overall sound you created. it wasn't simple - complex harmonies. so i liked that, too.
my only criticism is so mild as to be nothing: keep at it, if this is what you want to do. pursue your muse.
In reply to darling, i listened by genesis_piano
Thanks very much for listening!
I appreciate the response; I wasn't certain anyone listened at all :)
I would like to hear the mild criticism, even if it's nothing:
All it will do is improve my music!
In reply to Thanks+criticism by The Small Cheese
i guess i shouldn't have said i had a small "criticism." i don't have any criticism to share with you. I only wanted to tell you to keep writing.