I need Opinions

• Apr 17, 2018 - 16:36

I composed a Piece for one oboe and a string orchestra. It's like a Rondo. First, there is the Main Theme, after that there is an other theme and then there's the Main theme again and so on. Do you think it's boring or should I finish that Project?

Sry for my bad English, I am german

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This work sounds like 6/8.
And I do not see any special reason to write 4/4.
I translated it as 3/4. Take a look. (see attachment)

The answer to the other question is:
No, it's not boring.
I think it's very open to further development.
Many more instrumentations, variations, modulations, chords and different theme sections can be added.
PS: It is more like a violin work than Oboe.

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I agree with Ziya about it sounding more like 3/4. I don't see it unusual for the feature instrument to play unison or octaves with the accompaniment so I see it as an Oboe piece as you have made it. It definitely needs to be finished though. It ends in the middle of the song.

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