momentous occasion

• Jan 24, 2011 - 07:15

This is my first time writing music, and i decided to score it for a pep band. Feel free to leave any ideas on how to improve. Thanks :)

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i like the changes you made to the initial melody. i enjoyed some of the chords you used while you were changing it.

the ending is a bit abrupt for me. maybe other people wouldn't say that, but that's how it strikes me. maybe just another note or two leading to the last chord.

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