Here's a Little Song I wrote...

i like your, as you put it, "little song." a lot of energy with all that syncopation. do you play piano? i'd love to hear you play sometime, if this piece is any indicator of your rhythmic storehouse.

i didn't need the sixteenth notes until that descending passage in the piano. after that the flute does a little rip, i was fine with and liked that one, too. but before that, for my money, the sixteenths sound tacked on. you are already using so many note lengths, it just seems like a little much.

nicely done! hope to hear more from you in the near future.