Mischief

• Sep 9, 2017 - 19:25

A composition I made recently that I'd like to master on the piano, but before that I need suggestions.

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It would be more appropriate if the tied notes were written as follows:

doubledots.png

otherwise: it becomes impossible to read double-tied notes.

(and "f#" on second measure)


It looks like the style of some Bela Bartok works.

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