Unsinkable for Concert Band

• Oct 19, 2010 - 02:03

I am composing a soundscape of the Titanic's voyage for my high school graduation project. There will be four movements corresponding to the takeoff, cruising calmly along, the collision and sinking, and the aftermath. This is the very beginning of the first movement- comments, criticisms, and suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

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In reply to by obxbeachgoer

to me, it doesnt sound so much unsinkable type. I would think something grand and seemingly very happy talking about its maiden voyage. Try adding so more instruments and things going on. Also possibly lengthen it. If you chose, post your new edit on, cause i think this could be a cool piece.

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