How to rewrite these measures?
Sorry, I'm not very good with meter or composition, this is probably a stupid question. Is there a way to make the rhythm clearer in these measures?
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Comments
#1: 9/8 is a triple meter - it could be made clearer by changing the 1strok to a dotted quarter and continuing with notes grouped in that way.
#2. 6/8 is duple meter so that is clear.
#3. Change the dotted quarter to a quarter note tied to another quarter note.
#4. Change the dotted quarter ot an eighth tied to a quarter.
Regards,