Badass Rhodesian Dog turns to Science
Little bits and pieces can make a convincing whole. This bag gruff dog became enlightened and made a lot less noise! The humor is not really in this piece but the title says what I do best. I want to make this a part of my 4 or 5 inconsolable preludes. I don't know how to consolidate one separate page with another totally different file. Anyone visiting here can help me.
| Attachment | Size |
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| Badass Rhodesian Dog becomes Scientific by E.mscz | 4.55 KB |
| 4 or 5 INCONSOLABLE PRELUdes.mscz | 10.52 KB |
Comments
you could assemble pdf
or use (instable) musescore 2.0
or use (tricky) subterfuges in 1.2
In reply to pdf by robert leleu
named this piano music silly title though it does have some gruff barking intervals in the bass.was hoping someone would tell me what hey thought of the music!
Since you want comments, I'll give mine, for what it's worth.
Overall, I enjoyed your piece. It was quirky but made sense. I thought that the empty spaces were interesting at first, but in the middle/end of the piece I found myself wanting more in those spaces. It would have been nice to hear some of the older motifs return in those spaces, developed and mutated in the spirit of your piece. As is, I think those rests really kill any kind of momentum, which is especially apparent given the ending you wrote. If you develop the middle of your piece more, filling those empty spaces, then I think the overall flow and sense of phrasing of the piece will improve. I think this is a nice start, but it's not done yet. Don't give up on this.
In reply to badass Rhodesian Dog by lintlicker
i find it hilarious that your name is lintlicker and you specifically listened to a piece about a badass dog.
In reply to i find it hilarious that your by rokr258
Don't know may never know why it took me so long to return to a thread about improving my music. Mybfaith in community is definitely stronger now but i needed help A Dozen years ago. I prob didn't know how to navigate. Thank-you. I have moved on since then. I wanted to see this earlier composition and perhaps revise and put it in a current group. But can't locate so...
PRELUDES (Continued)
Prelude No 2 begins very well and then stops . . .
It could be at least twice as long - or more
and is worth working on.
Prelude No 3 Is very catchy - and I hope that you
continue working on the piece.
Prelude No 4 The Opening 3/4 section is captivating
but then we have an ocean of eighth notes on the C.
A couple of bars would be OK but you could consider
some variety of pitch (give the "C" a rest) and some
variety of rhythm - a dotted eighth note or a triplet
and variety of Dynamics.
Prelude No 5 Is fine! More please!!
Conclusion: Some very nice ideas here! I would
encourage you to add to the very short Preludes
and get them performed! Jeff
PRELUDES
Prelude No 1 The first section is very interesting
and sets the tone for something exciting - and
then we have bars of 4 square quarter notes which
could be spiced up in some way to be as rewarding
as the open section promises.
Prelude No 2 Begins very well and then stops . . .
It could be at least twice as long - or more . . .
and is worth working on.
Prelude No 3 Is very catchy - and I hope that you
continue working on the Prelude.
Prelude No 4 The Opening 3/4 section is captivating
but then we have an ocean of eighth notes on the C.
A couple of bars would be OK but you could consider
some variety of pitch (give the "C" a rest) and some
variety of rhythm - a dotted eighth note or a triplet
and variety of Dynamics.
Prelude No 5 Is fine! More please!!
Conclusion: Some very nice ideas here! I would
encourage you to add to the very short Preludes
and get them performed! Jeff